Titan Vs. Tha Kid [0-3 KO]

4 bars....
No flipping....
Check in by tomorrow night
Due by Wednesday

Why isnt my sig posted up on the "screen"""".... That makes me mad, drive my F-150 against ya ""Spleen"""""

Go to work with ya brains in my"" lunch box"":,....ya girls breast tied to my chest her corpse in """sand lots""":

Throw ya meat in Pits where my slave girl Sits,.......My dick tucked between my legs Im Fukn SICK

I jump out cha closest And threw acid in Ya Face....,....Smack an axe behind ya } "ankle" blade first then watch it "dangle""}

kk... simple here.. kinda one sided...

flow- tie..
multies- Kid
punches- Kid
werdplay- Kid
nameplays- Kid
similes- Kid
delivery- Kid..

so.. The Kid GMV...

titan.. jus keep workin on yah shit.. cuz its madd basic ...

thanks for taking time to vote, Kris....im liking ya activity

Shiiiiittt... Tha Kid, you really stepped up from the battle on SL i seen. Nice work.

Tha Kid won in all categories cuz Titan's last bar didn't flow well to me.

Titan:
you need to come DIRECT in battles, Fam.
I see you spitn' more for a HorrorCore battle here..
Which isn't all THAT bad - but in regular text, you wanna
attack yur opponent where it'll do the most damage...

So... research your opponents posts, his profile, his
style, his beliefs... attack anything personal about him/her.
That'll get you battling on a more aggressive front.
As this battle verse you posted wasn't really dissing him
in any significant way. Basically... it's gonna get you
more advantage if you make the battle personal - 'cause
from what I see here... these bars can Not Only be used
against anyone... but your punchlines are lacking a whole lot.

Think of punchlines like those inuendos that you have
to think about for a second to get... similies are good to use
and one of the easiest methods... like;

Call me Frank Castle the way I punish this dude...

Now, we all know about the movie punisher, and the character's name
is Frank Castle... so - there's the similie.
If you have any questions, don't be shy... ask around.
All members are willing to help out... well, most anyway.

So, all in all, this battle verse is very generic and I
think you can do a lot better... I been reading your ish since
Raplaws - and I've seen you posting with some pretty
dope concepts... stay up, though, Fam.
Don't let your beginning slow you down.
One ['1]

Tha Kid:
you came with a more direct approach... attacking Titans sig, his email name,
his user name and the idea that he might not have hit the send button.
In my opinion, that last punch wasn't hitting all that hard. But you edged
this battle. The coloring confused the fuck out'uh me, but I was able to
get the content.
Some filler that could'uh been left out, but all in all, decent battle verse
for not battling in a bit.
I've seen you drop harder, though.

Overall... Tha Kid came more direct and formulated punches which Titan
was lacking in.

MVGT = Tha Kid.

lol i was tryna show tha inners and ish...plus iss election day gotta rep dat red white and blue muthafucka

3-0 = KO I WIN!! lol