Damn, Kris... that hit home, man.
I got some Famz in my family that've used for years...
I've grown to love them even though they do what they do...
I mean, I've been' there... just knew it wasn't where I wanted to be.
They just haven't felt that way [yet].
I can feel the emotion in this a lot...
conveyance was bang on... I understood you through the entire piece...
I woke up this morning feeling
cold inside ... and this read
right hrere actually brought in some warmth... thanx, Fam.
Aside from ANY critique I would give this... which would consist of
a few lines at least... I was way more into the content...
Memz' ain't gotta have all the fancy werdplays and punches to
actually reach somebody in they material - and this def~ shows that, imo...
Rhymes felt natural through the whole thing as I read...
Opener was dope, brought me in and set the mood... good shit.
Not 1 inconsistency, imo... this was tight for content, homie.
There was this transfer:
~ Critique ~ - Quote :
- You went from him to him.. one bad insident to another..
Fights within yer family occured.. shattering words
... from your mother, father, sisters, and brothers..
You didnt know what to do.. you just fled the grim frowns..
Trying to forget their slander.. you choked the medicine down..
...that I had to read twice to catch... but it werked out I guess...
This is by far the dopest piece I've seen from you - fuck all them punches
and shit in battles that wow Famz... this was solid content, man... and this
type'uh material means more to me, as a writer, than any other tech'...
Ya' feel me?
Nice drop, Fam... I def~ felt it.
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