Nice... and welcome.
Make sure to post an Intro in the "Front Room" section of the forum....your drop? ...def~ got the flow down... I actually liked the scheme, too.
Not exactly basic, but you got the wording to amp up the feel of it.
Content? ...I'd read around the forums a lil'... get to know what type'uh shit's
been get'n feeds and what gets more hits and attention in terms of content.
For a showcase of flow - this was decent. Def~ got potential to toss
up some sick drops... but this specific "subject" of material ain't too
popular imo... but, aside from that... ya' vocab ain't too bad, needs some
broadening... for sure. I tried looking it up... but, what's a dula?
Anyway... yeah, make sure you elevate some 'fore you go dropping
for rankage... just a thought.
Nice showcase of flow, though... Like I said.
and... again... Welcome to HGR.
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