On top of my game...

13.minute rhyme*

Ingenius rhymes from millions of minds all clash together
some Greedy inside yet we all form a style together
Benevolent cleverness conjesting the forums they selves
those "Respected" or "Rejected" still forming they "gels"
Compelled to bring arms in combat, we's armies abundant
One tells another it's on and one reaps thee argument's "luncheon"
Another win, for the one who's covenant and "above da' government"
the Judges unerring, bitch gon' Underling for opposing companies
The drama unfolds in fornta' the whole fuckin' community
One "Mad" schmoe just goes and "flows" for sicker immunity
This shit "ain't what it used to be", it's "Next" or "Redden"
Left dead from the head shots that breaks shit, beggin'
Cancel your chances at ever becoming more a than I
Anguish is the only true answer to "don't-or-die"
This storm gets High - so there's nowhere to hide or catch-a-"breather"
All its chaos rips ya' minds, so beware of "theatric-cleavers"
I ain't "back" - I'm still here - so just relax - and I ain't steered
So try to refrain from playing with hate games, 'cause it ain't Feared
I'm well revered, living in hell so there's no comparison
to watch them punches you muster up and end up ckoking like "Garison"...

yea-yeah... let me know what's Good, Fam... ONE ['1]

vocab is tight you keep gettin better mayn.

vocab is good.. forsure.. but sum lines didnt rhyme.. n you didnt really show many elements, but for a keystyle i liked the read.. was a nice lil drop.. props on that.. but i feel like it coulda had more effort.. lik instead of makin it 13 minutes, why not make it 15 n take the extra to miniutes to complete n tighten the lines n concepts.. yah know.. good drop tho...

I key like... my mind is freestyling this shit out...
so... if I go back and touch up shit, I would be defeating
the purpose here, imo... When I key... I don't let boundries
become real... I drop everthing and put the pedal to
floor... no holds barred... and this is actually one of my better flowing ones...

I've done quite a few and I'm getting better... even
I can notice that. But I appreciate [civilized] feed on
my shit, regardless, Kris... So, thanx for the looks and feed, Fam.

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