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Madeye Admin
Number of posts : 496 Age : 47 Location : Here and now. Mood : Predatorial Points : 1 Registration date : 2008-10-24
Battle Record Wins: 4 KO Wins: 2 Losses: 1
| Subject: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws Tue 28 Oct 2008, 9:54 pm | |
| fuck it... I can't resist flippin' on this dude. He posted twice anywayz...
Fresh meat? Nah! - this dude's rotten! with expired spices! shit... he comes to battle - but types his shit all tired, lifeless!
Only way you titan is... clenched-teeth 'cause my plays' coarse... bash you repeatedly like I was dumpin 'Brick' Hail-Storms!
Ya' plays is norms, can't displace with boring metaphors... you claim you Lion, but just lie'n! Those plays ain't Never tore!
I'll mash this dude like steamed potatoes at a cook-out... Feed my Famz with this skimpy man, he'll keep'uh constant lookout!
If you's bio is Actual... then, shit... just Observe! I'll drop illest Flows and wrap you up in bold convicting words!
Call me boa the way I squeeze life out ya' newb rhymes... You ain't got no space to breath, and sure as fuck ain't got brute lines...
Posts 2 times and still ain't got the shit thas' made to kill! Man, I suggest you start biting or grow some fuckin' new skills...
Like su per ior in fer ior ly rics that flows... 'stead you dropped some shit that would've lost to a fuckin' No-Show!
Last edited by Madeye on Tue 04 Nov 2008, 3:13 am; edited 1 time in total | |
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Tha Kid Admin
Number of posts : 264 Age : 43 Location : New York Mood : Hungry Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-10-28
Battle Record Wins: 1 KO Wins: 1 Losses: 2
| Subject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws Wed 29 Oct 2008, 1:48 am | |
| Fresh meat? Nah! - this dude's rotten! with expired spices! shit... he comes to battle - but types his shit all tired, lifeless! Dope opener, nice play w/ tha fresh meat n spice; nice punch in tha second line
Only way you titan is... clenched-teeth 'cause my plays' coarse... bash you repeatedly like I was dumpin 'Brick' Hail-Storms! Nice bar, could've extended that multie a bit more but nice none the less
Ya' plays is norms, can't displace with boring metaphors... you claim you Lion, but just lie'n! Those plays ain't Never tore! Liked all tha inners in this bar; punch didnt hit tha hardest but it was still decent
I'll mash this dude like steamed potatoes at a cook-out... Feed my Famz with this skimpy man, he'll keep'uh constant lookout! Lol funny but i felt u could've made that punch hit a bit harder
If you's bio is Actual... then, shit... just Observe! I'll drop illest Flows and wrap you up in bold convicting words! Dope line and flowed nicely
overall... nice battle verse, keep elevatin
Call me boa the way I squeeze life out ya' newb rhymes... You ain't got no space to breath, and sure as fuck ain't got brute lines... Nice play in the first line and nice multie
Posts 2 times and still ain't got the shit thas' made to kill! Man, I suggest you start biting or grow some fuckin' new skills... Lol @ i suggest you start biting
Like su per ior in fer ior ly rics that flows... 'stead you dropped some shit that would've lost to a fuckin' No-Show! Sick closer, nice inner in the 1st line and good humor in the 2nd line | |
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Madeye Admin
Number of posts : 496 Age : 47 Location : Here and now. Mood : Predatorial Points : 1 Registration date : 2008-10-24
Battle Record Wins: 4 KO Wins: 2 Losses: 1
| Subject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws Wed 29 Oct 2008, 2:02 am | |
| nice... nice... thanx again for the feed and yur vote, Kid. yeah... I was lacking in a few bars but made up for it with my last 2.
I wasn't even pissed or nuthin'.... but this kid obviously came inot laws, wanted to battle, but didn't have a fuckin' clue how to do shit. And then when he posted that second verse, I had to laugh - 'cause he ain't come direct... but I won't bag on'em for that... he obviously is new to this game. So I just put my criticism into my verse.
...yeah, I'm back nig. Madeye tore down the bricks and now I stand taller- 'cause I'm lifted by the mound of bricks... lmao.
koo', fa,m... thanx for the looks and the feed.
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Tha Kid Admin
Number of posts : 264 Age : 43 Location : New York Mood : Hungry Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-10-28
Battle Record Wins: 1 KO Wins: 1 Losses: 2
| Subject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws Wed 29 Oct 2008, 2:06 am | |
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Queen Fresh Meat
Number of posts : 9 Age : 33 Location : Allentown Mood : flirty Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-11-01
Battle Record Wins: 0 KO Wins: 0 Losses: 0
| Subject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws Sat 01 Nov 2008, 3:46 am | |
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Madeye Admin
Number of posts : 496 Age : 47 Location : Here and now. Mood : Predatorial Points : 1 Registration date : 2008-10-24
Battle Record Wins: 4 KO Wins: 2 Losses: 1
| Subject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws Sat 01 Nov 2008, 7:56 pm | |
| thanx Queen...
I appreciate the looks, Famz. One ['1] | |
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Kris Kokain Admin
Number of posts : 394 Age : 35 Location : Kingston, ON., Canada Mood : Carnivorous Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-11-04
Battle Record Wins: 3 KO Wins: 2 Losses: 1
| Subject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws Tue 04 Nov 2008, 6:26 pm | |
| meh.. only good line was the closer.. yah know it had a nice punch.. flow was on point, but you didnt really say much.. like the lion line coulda bin flipped madly.. like lions travel in prides/families.. could make the concept lik he goes to gay parades to swollow pride er sum shit.. other then jus sayin hes not one.. but keep at it.. | |
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east renegade Moderator
Number of posts : 164 Age : 32 Location : east coast Mood : alright Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-11-07
Battle Record Wins: 2 KO Wins: 2 Losses: 1
| Subject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws Wed 12 Nov 2008, 1:59 pm | |
| lol overkilled titan, i liked ur first,third, and seventh bar, everything else was simple n ok, but for titan, it was still overkill lol solid verse | |
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