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Madeye
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PostSubject: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws   my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws EmptyTue 28 Oct 2008, 9:54 pm

fuck it... I can't resist flippin' on this dude. He posted twice anywayz...

Fresh meat? Nah! - this dude's rotten! with expired spices!
shit... he comes to battle - but types his shit all tired, lifeless!

Only way you titan is... clenched-teeth 'cause my plays' coarse...
bash you repeatedly like I was dumpin 'Brick' Hail-Storms!

Ya' plays is norms, can't displace with boring metaphors...
you claim you Lion, but just lie'n! Those plays ain't Never tore!

I'll mash this dude like steamed potatoes at a cook-out...
Feed my Famz with this skimpy man, he'll keep'uh constant lookout!

If you's bio is Actual... then, shit... just Observe!
I'll drop illest Flows and wrap you up in bold convicting words!

Call me boa the way I squeeze life out ya' newb rhymes...
You ain't got no space to breath, and sure as fuck ain't got brute lines...

Posts 2 times and still ain't got the shit thas' made to kill!
Man, I suggest you start biting or grow some fuckin' new skills...

Like su per ior in fer ior ly rics that flows...
'stead you dropped some shit that would've lost to a fuckin' No-Show!


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PostSubject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws   my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws EmptyWed 29 Oct 2008, 1:48 am

Fresh meat? Nah! - this dude's rotten! with expired spices!
shit... he comes to battle - but types his shit all tired, lifeless!
Dope opener, nice play w/ tha fresh meat n spice; nice punch in tha second line

Only way you titan is... clenched-teeth 'cause my plays' coarse...
bash you repeatedly like I was dumpin 'Brick' Hail-Storms!
Nice bar, could've extended that multie a bit more but nice none the less

Ya' plays is norms, can't displace with boring metaphors...
you claim you Lion, but just lie'n! Those plays ain't Never tore!
Liked all tha inners in this bar; punch didnt hit tha hardest but it was still decent

I'll mash this dude like steamed potatoes at a cook-out...
Feed my Famz with this skimpy man, he'll keep'uh constant lookout!
Lol funny but i felt u could've made that punch hit a bit harder

If you's bio is Actual... then, shit... just Observe!
I'll drop illest Flows and wrap you up in bold convicting words!
Dope line and flowed nicely

overall... nice battle verse, keep elevatin

Call me boa the way I squeeze life out ya' newb rhymes...
You ain't got no space to breath, and sure as fuck ain't got brute lines...
Nice play in the first line and nice multie

Posts 2 times and still ain't got the shit thas' made to kill!
Man, I suggest you start biting or grow some fuckin' new skills...
Lol @ i suggest you start biting

Like su per ior in fer ior ly rics that flows...
'stead you dropped some shit that would've lost to a fuckin' No-Show!
Sick closer, nice inner in the 1st line and good humor in the 2nd line
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PostSubject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws   my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws EmptyWed 29 Oct 2008, 2:02 am

nice... nice... thanx again for the feed and yur vote, Kid.
yeah... I was lacking in a few bars but made up for it with my last 2.

I wasn't even pissed or nuthin'.... but this kid obviously came inot laws, wanted
to battle, but didn't have a fuckin' clue how to do shit. And then when he posted that second
verse, I had to laugh - 'cause he ain't come direct... but I won't bag on'em for that...
he obviously is new to this game. So I just put my criticism into my verse.

...yeah, I'm back nig. Madeye tore down the bricks and now I stand taller-
'cause I'm lifted by the mound of bricks... lmao.

koo', fa,m... thanx for the looks and the feed.

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PostSubject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws   my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws EmptyWed 29 Oct 2008, 2:06 am

haha word
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PostSubject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws   my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws EmptySat 01 Nov 2008, 3:46 am

wow dopelines
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PostSubject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws   my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws EmptySat 01 Nov 2008, 7:56 pm

thanx Queen...

I appreciate the looks, Famz.
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PostSubject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws   my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws EmptyTue 04 Nov 2008, 6:26 pm

meh.. only good line was the closer.. yah know it had a nice punch.. flow was on point, but you didnt really say much.. like the lion line coulda bin flipped madly.. like lions travel in prides/families.. could make the concept lik he goes to gay parades to swollow pride er sum shit.. other then jus sayin hes not one..
but keep at it..
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PostSubject: Re: my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws   my battle verse againt titan @ 'Laws EmptyWed 12 Nov 2008, 1:59 pm

lol overkilled titan, i liked ur first,third, and seventh bar, everything else was simple n ok, but for titan, it was still overkill lol solid verse
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