Titan Fresh Meat
Number of posts : 47 Age : 42 Location : HB Mood : Guess Points : 3 Registration date : 2008-10-31
Battle Record Wins: 0 KO Wins: 0 Losses: 4
| Subject: JUST TYPE NO THINKIN Sat 01 Nov 2008, 10:38 am | |
| TOUCHH THE KEYBOARD AND TYPE WATCH HERE THE DAVID BLAIN OF THIS RAP PARADE IM COOL IN MY SHADES, HAIL WEATHER WITH, MY BABE MY BOYZ KNO IM MADE STARDUM' TO, MY, GRAVE MY ASIAN MOMMIE RUDE RAGED, CUZ I IGNORED HER "2 WAYS" IM ONE MAN ,,,, STEPIN TALLL,,,,,, LIKE JORDANS LAST STAND ITS IMPORTANT THAT I DEMAND , BUT NOT FORCING LIKE -THE MAN , T H E S E ,----------------- HEAVY RHYMES SHOLD """"""""""""B----WEIGHED"" """"""" GET DUNKED UPON LIKE """""""D----WADE""""" MEDAL HUNGRY, NOW HE'S GREAT | |
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Madeye Admin
Number of posts : 496 Age : 47 Location : Here and now. Mood : Predatorial Points : 1 Registration date : 2008-10-24
Battle Record Wins: 4 KO Wins: 2 Losses: 1
| Subject: Re: JUST TYPE NO THINKIN Tue 04 Nov 2008, 2:39 am | |
| huh.... good key shit, Titan...
not really hard hitting ish, but I can see the creativity in it... nice 2 syll. multies [for a key] but could'uh been lengthened. Over all... nice style and wording... All made sense, in their own [each lines own] context. Try sticking to one subject as you key. This wasn't a bad key - persay... but I think you could make more of an impact if you concentrated on something imparticular. Like an emotion or something you feel strongly about, in the moment.
Nice, though, Fam. Glad to see the use of this "Key" forum put to use. Props.
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Kris Kokain Admin
Number of posts : 394 Age : 35 Location : Kingston, ON., Canada Mood : Carnivorous Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-11-04
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| Subject: Re: JUST TYPE NO THINKIN Tue 04 Nov 2008, 8:18 pm | |
| sure sounds lik a freestyle.. props on that.. would sound betta as a audio tho... | |
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DiReCt HiT Fresh Meat
Number of posts : 30 Age : 35 Location : Jacksonville Mood : High as Fuck Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-11-08
Battle Record Wins: 1 KO Wins: 0 Losses: 0
| Subject: Re: JUST TYPE NO THINKIN Sat 08 Nov 2008, 2:14 am | |
| Audio Type Stuff here
oh just to tell you when you write in caps it slows down the flow but the flow is still good man
lyrically you know alright for just a free type.
not much to say pretty solid. | |
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