Elementaly v.s. Kris Kokain [Needs Votes!] Currently 4-2 Kris

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First to 3 votes, or 2-0 Is'a KO..

-Chin Check-
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G'Luck

im verses hot lik i make it wit'a flame, leav'a faggit wit no brain..
cuz you'll get the "L ementality" like its STATED IN YA NAME//
this hoe hardly will score, simply i'll my flows spark Gs wit 4s..
K no rider!!.. u wuldnt catch "kain on Els dick" at coke partys wit whores//
Kris known ta shell ya Ment, hit'cha wit skills-- its hell i vent..
cuz we aint speakin french... but we know thurs no way Ell-a-gent//

expos??.. L- loss.. its his name L-ementaly.. elemetally.., coke partys wit hoes you get'um to snort lines of coke (kain--cocain), ellegent.. girls are that (least most R).. elle in french means girll.. took 5 mins...

iight here we go... (explanations are in black)

You ain’t dope, a decreasing shot for success, needing a Pap-uzi for gun hope
…A chance he’ll win? Nope, he’s slow n lope, too far, can’t see within a scope…
He’s ‘Been-a-Dick’ so I drive by he’s HIT IN A CROSS, I’ll make him more holy then the pope

Papoose in his sig. Pap-uzi
Benedict the pope – Been a dick (like his attitude he’s cocky)

Kicking the bucket, he’s pale-in like a bitch with no brains to remain in a no win campaign
Rep-public-can’s are no gain, I’ll-ask-a snowman if this faggots supporting Mc-cane

Pale-In – Palin
Rep-public-can’s – republicans
I’ll-ask-a – Alaska
Mc-cane – McCain

He don't HOLD IT DOWN, selling coke stashes but 'one-ate-E-too' as their life flashes
I'll KNOCK HIM DOWN-N-OUT, he's blinking but he's no survivor when Travis comes down and crashes

One-ate-E-two - Like Blink 182. (Travis Barker's plane crashed)

@ took 5 mins.
We all know this shit was quick. lol.

iight yo lets get some votes.

Hold up... how is 2 - 0 a KO?
Why not like...
3 - 0 = KO & win
4 - 1 = TKO & win

Complexity: E
Consistency: Tie
Entertainment: E
Flow: Tie
Multies: KK.....K lol
Nameplay: KK, E had one nameplay KK had two
Originality: E w/ all the wordplays
Personals: E, I found two in each verse, i liked E's better so he gets the vote
Punchlines: KK
Rhyme scheme: KK
Structure of verse: Tie
Vocabulary: N/A
Wordplays: E, easy

5 cats for E
4 cats for K

Elementality got my vote.

1 - 0

Thanks for the vote man.

Aiight...
I'ma do cats' and a short b/down...

Opener: Kris... both had nice plays... imo, Kris had opened with more aggressiveness and intention to win.
Creativity: Elementality... good plays.
Flow: Kris... shorter/tighter bars made the read flow nicer.
W/Plays: Elementality... easy.
N/Plays: Kris.
Vocab: Elementality.
Entertainment: Elementality... his plays were quite amusing.
Consistency: Tie.
Complexity: Elementality with those plays... well thought out.
Multies: Kris.
Creativity: Elem'.
Originality: Elem'.
Closer: Felt Kris' more.
Over all: Elem'.

5 cats for Kris - 8 cats for Elementality ~ out of a possible 14.


...Kris Kokain - I enjoyed your play on his name...
seemed a bit forced, but got a little "whoa" out'uh me with that. Props.
Try to refrain from uppin' yourself unless there's a clever punch behind it.
Stay on target at all times... on your opponent.
The filler really costed you this battle, imo. Work on that.


...Elementality - good use of plays and vocabulary. I ain't a fan of the
streatched lines, so you lost a little bit of edge there, imo. But you sdged this
battle with your w/plays. They werern't all that Hard Hitting, but showed
good use of'em. Last bar was worded a little awkward for me... I got the
play... but, again... wasn't hitting all That hard.

Good battle by both... although - I'm sure Kris has a lot more
tactics in his arsenal. Both could elevate some in their own ways...

Anyway... MVGT = Elementality.

2 - 0

thanks for the vote.

Votez please?

Simple El got this one , especially after dropn and explainin that Alaska ..Joint

*Poll has been reset*

I then voted which makes it 1- 0 for Elementality...

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Opener: Kris because it hit harder, el urs was gd but stretched which killed the hit with ur punch, both had nice wordplay though
Creativity: Elementality
Flow: Kris
WordPlay: both
NamePlay: Kris.
Vocab: none
punches: kris
Entertainment: both
Complexity: el
Multies: kris
Closer: Kris
vote: kris
to me this battle was close, mostly because both had nice wordplay, kris gets my vote though because his flowed better to me and had harder punches. el's bars was stretched a lil which lost the punch and to me the battle, both verses were pretty even to me though, close battle

2 - 1

Thanks for the vote man.

travis did servive the plain crash.. yer yer flow is weak.. along wit madd streched lines wit forced werdplay.. but w/e... its all good..

1.) No Survivor WHEN Travis comes down n crashes. Meaning you're not travis but one of the others.

2.) Quit hating. If I wanted to critisize yours I would have. Like "putting the L in emenality" PLAYED! All your lines were like spelling bee's you had to add a letter "gils" girls. Or some shit. C'mon man, you can't use the same punch over and over to win in one battle.

im not going to vote; [sorry E] because i'd give tha vote to E and then KK would be saying i was hating on him and shit like a pussy....but [now for tha reason why im posting right]....KK u talk mad shit for someone who doesnt hit as hard as they claim they do...i agree w/ E, your shits played and isnt that great.

AND IM GONE.

Aiight...

enough freeposting, Famz.

rofl... wen did i hate on any votes sonny boi??.. its honest critisism.. str8 up.. lines r streched.. werdplay was weak.. n if you hav to explain sumthin more then once then yer concept obviously sucks the big one.. and my verse?? str8 up.. pretty much only thing good about it was the flow n multies.. concepts were played .. kept usin the same nameplay but in different fashions.. umm.. wut else.. it was lik a 5minute key.. umm.. but still considering the concepts n plays .. i still woulda gave it to myself.. even as not lookin at the battle from a bias point of view...

UPPIN VOTES...

can we get some votes!?!!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Seriously. This pisses me off.

Punches- K
Meta- K
Multie- E
Wordplay- K (elementalily seemed to be MAD forced)
Nameplay- K
Creative- Both
Flow- both
Vocab- Both
Vote- Kris

Why?
simpley because i thought Elementily had some LONG ass Bars ROFL
plus, he had the right idea at the end of the bar, but the meta didnt match
which is why he lost the vote for that..
also, some of his wordplay was forced like honestly.. Pap Uzi?, its PAP-POOSE
Mad Different,
To Be Honest, i think the other voters dickrided on this one..
but i dont really care.. DONT TRY AND DEFEND YOUR SELF, cuz i dont care
lol

Vote -Kris