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Philisophical@Rappn
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Philisophical@Rappn


Number of posts : 45
Age : 35
Location : detroit
Mood : feel like rappen a story
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Registration date : 2008-11-16

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PostSubject: New Site   New Site EmptyWed 19 Nov 2008, 10:01 am

These sudden flows of beats, im suddenly grasped
This rapper speaks, slow, swift, motivated not fast
The demons weep, at wats to become of christmas past
Another one sheeps, the infuence that my ryhmes cast
Finally appreciated, and happy with my position in life
Still dedicated, to decomposing rappers as i spit in the mic
Finally elevated, Cause my spirit can flow unrestricted w/ flow
Never hesitated, But on other terms, rappers try to put out my glow
Chasen gold steady, but not the jewlry that most ppl obsess over
My style veries, Cause literally i make em think & go find like rover
Most rappas r petty, Because the true game they have no respect for
But i'll murder many, just so that you know, a joke please dont take it for
But with my last line, I ryhme like i have no yesterday, today or tomorrow
Like a polished dime, Been through alot, but nobody nomore will bring me sorrow

I appreciate all the positive feed that yall have been giving me, i came from another site and never got anything but negative energy
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Kris Kokain
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Kris Kokain


Number of posts : 394
Age : 35
Location : Kingston, ON., Canada
Mood : Carnivorous
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Registration date : 2008-11-04

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PostSubject: Re: New Site   New Site EmptyWed 19 Nov 2008, 10:06 am

respect for take it for.. didnt go.. kinda thew it off..
..after the rover line it kinda fell off, but before that the flow was fuckin dope n the rhyme scheme was illy..
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Madeye
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Madeye


Number of posts : 496
Age : 47
Location : Here and now.
Mood : Predatorial
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Registration date : 2008-10-24

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PostSubject: Re: New Site   New Site EmptyWed 19 Nov 2008, 8:07 pm

yeah... wut Kris said... although...
I really liked the message you was giving... makes me feel like all
our hard werk is paying off. Yeah... I jus' wanted to create
a place where Newbish/Soulish Famz can come and get some
positive feed and encouragement. A lot of [most] these other forums
don't give you the time'uh day if you ain't writing to their standards...

so... fuck'em... we gotta home now, if ya'll feel me.
Plus... I can see a few heads in here that'll be killin'em critiquing bitches
that hate on us 'down-to-earth' styles and sorts in not too much
time... also... we's slowly becoming our own breed amongst breeds.

..............
Yup... flow was sick for your first half here...
a lil' choppy - but not so much throwing me off... would sound tight on audio...
Kepp them flows flowing, Fam.

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Philisophical@Rappn
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Philisophical@Rappn


Number of posts : 45
Age : 35
Location : detroit
Mood : feel like rappen a story
Points : 3
Registration date : 2008-11-16

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PostSubject: Re: New Site   New Site EmptySun 23 Nov 2008, 10:21 pm

Thanx for the positive feed
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