simply a keystyle...

check it, havnt done one in a hot minute... hola at me..

Yo...
I insight fear, wen i write here.. lik right here..
see me roll by wen i strike queers, wit spikes gear'd..
ta rip ya abdomin, split n hammer him- sick n faster man..
the grips R shatterin, im mad at him.. the kids immasculen..
so wen i freestyle ya see vile, n i ease bile thru ya kidnees while..
ya get turned seanile!!.. i simply spit a verse to deafeat styles..
make'ya catch sum Zs, especially wen my punches on wreckin sprees..
test me?.. put'a tech ta knees, now stand up ta kris.. ya regret it b?..
N regretibly.. i smash ya dome, qwik fast wit chrome to'a bastids bones..
slash ya throat.. the impacts r known ta leav bashed off a fantasic throne..

.. srry it so short.. took me bout 5 minutes.. basically jus wrote multies.. yah.. hola..

Nice...

I could feel the build-up with the rhyme as it went on.
Flowed smooth and authentically, vocab was decent... nice wit' it.

Ahhh... even though it was this short of a piece, ya' still
got out a fair amount of content... had me boppin' to tha' flow, too.
shit... that immasculine line had me like... "whoa" thas' a new one.
Props.


I ain't really into critiquing keystyles, 'cause they're pretty
much jus' shots at freestyling.... so I won't knock this as a Open Mic verse.

not really much to bat an eye at. lolz... ya' got
good key skills, anyhow. Got me wanting to
do this shit, too.

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thax for the feed.. yah i know. not much to say in the verse.. more just sayin ..
"Hi my names kris, im good at multies..." haha