Kris Kokain [Vs.] east renegade [0-0]

Ya'll know the rules [if not, peep'em]

1st round / 3
let's get down to it.
G'luck to the both of you.

check, gdluck

chizzeck..

i'm diceing his lungs just to polish my blade by hollowin his shit like "pullin out stocks"
sliceing his toungue to demolish his crusade n swallow his spit like his "mouths full of cock"!!(cocky)//
endenting a rusty nail in his brain conflict in him with a "lethal writeing block"
preventing the dusty wail of this "ko kaine" addict to relieve his "feeble fighting glocks"//
ending his "pale"-norm of lines by vanishin and slay in wit ember to give "vividness" to this dike
sending hailstorms of rhymes to banish this KKK member in the livid ice!!!//
this "hero" sins cause he cant write smart...so he's a bitch that folds-like wen his fat ass splits
zero wins since the site started and beefing with a "kid"?? shit even with a "goldmic" this cat cant spit!!//


expos*
has a goldmic account, in a thread i think he said he was kids hero or rolemodel and he is beefing with the kid
rusty nail can be deadly and his fighting is feeble
hollowin=remove the interior, i'm removein his rhymes like pullin out stocks-stock market went down, mad ppl pulled their money out
anything u dont get ask

aight.. good looks.. nice drop E.R.
..here comes the real heat tho...

--He gon' losin to madeye in MW belt battle.. Mad basically murked'um..madeye is pronounced mayday.. well atleast if you sound it out it is.. wen a plane goes down they say "MAYDAY" over the walkie talkie.. 9/11 two planes went down
--His mood is "Alright"
--His profile says his job/hobbie is text battling
--Gemini n Aries are male names.. also zodiac-signs.. his is Taurus.. right between them..

im snipin'um out.. so fuck this guys strechin ways cuz all his plays-gay, n ya fight fo' the belt was it was lik 9/11 planes.. jus ALL madeye//

and movin' on...

Ren.. i spit'a stern death.. wit'a verse that burns chests, so you wnt be "feelin alright".. wen i hit'cha so hard all ya do is turn left..//
my punches splittin ya dome.. N its vivid u'll be lifted n thrown, so if yer "job is text battling".. we all know Rens still livin at home..//
im identified as scary.. but E dnt tare Gs wit lead n knives, hes fairy, n dnt lie.. we know u stay "between guys" n its not gemini n aries..//

wutt'up.. vote up HGRs...

nice verse man, gdluck

...nice battle, Famz.

CATS'...
Flow: Kris... tighter lines, tighter flow.
Multies: Kris... Gotta give this to'em... e.r... your multies are mismatched [syllable counts are off]
Consistency: tie... Both kept on the task of dissing theeir opponent.
Complexity: e.r. ... imo, E.R's structure to his lines/bars were quite complex.
Punches: Kris...
W/Plays: east ren... watch your deliveries, though... they're sliding a lil' bit, imo.
N/Plays: east ren... had the only n/play.
Personals: Kris.
OverAll: Kris... and he wins the cats'.

Kris...
First bar was good formulation, but not so good delivery. While I liked the intent there... the "mayday" annunciation you tried to capture jus' didn't get nailed... imo.
Punches need to be amped up to do damage later on in this tourney - for both u famz.
east ren...
although Kris'z punches were hitting with less force than was actually possible with what he spat... his connected better with 'srt8 to the point' deliveries. Ren, your's had much too much mixed concepts to land heaviness in some solid fashion - pick this up in yur next bout. You gotta go at'em more direct.


*if there are any inconsistencies within my vote - speak up. I'm under the influence atm. lolz.

im under the influence as-well... and thanks for the vote..

For clarification... Kris got my vote...

1 - 0 ...for Kris

thanks for the vote and feed man

Flow - Ren's was iight at times. But it slipped, maybe the syllables or the way i was reading it. But Kris' was an easier read for flow, so Kris got this one.

Multies - Both had them. Really close to call. I think Kris' were iight not wow-ing. But same with Ren. I gotta go with the tie.

Complexity - All around I think Ren got this one. But then again, that's just how the two styles differ in this battle.

Punches - I thought both were iight. But when it came down to it, Kris came stronger with the punches.

Nameplay - Um... both were so-so if Kris had much. But Ren had it.

Overall - this can go either way... But end over end I liked Kris' punches more. Ren came strong though. A total toss up, i gotta say Kris came a lil stronger.

Vote: Kris

thanks for the feed and vote, 2-0 for kris

uppin votes...

Kris got my vote.

east had more and tigher multis, but you put TO many of em.

if oyu put to many in there your punches weakens.

both had a couple palyed concepts and dope concepts.

i belive kris was more consistant but i think east had more hay makers.

if you want me to b4b lemme know.

good battle tho.

thanks for the vote man 3-0, kris wins, gd battle man