Elementality [Vs.] Tha Kid [0-0]

Ya'll know the rules [if not, peep'em]

1st round / 3
let's get down to it.
G'luck to the both of you.

chin check & G'Luck kid.

check

My bad yo... I thought we both had to check up before we drop... Anywayz.

It’s no clean floss; my info, he 'scanned-el' the kid on SL’s the boss? & El gave him a loss
Have him raped AT ALL COSTS like you were at a party with the Duke Lacrosse

Tha Kid on this site is Tha Boss on Sickest Lyrics (and I beat him there)
Scanned-El, (el - elementality) he has all these personals on me. Also Scanned-El = Scanndal like the Duke Lacrosse case.

Intrigued cuz this tourney was of the best, but you must be suffering fatigue
I mean your lines are 'full of bad plays' like you’re in a pop warner football league

I don’t know what you thinking, TOO MANY SHOTS, I battle-ships and you’re sinking
Call Captain Morgan cuz I just left this Kid wasted like he was underage drinking!

A beast in a diner getting prizes like a miner, he’s LOOKING FOR TIPS from the finer
Wants to be an animal so he checking ‘PETA-Files’ out but this Kid’s the minor

Pedophiles = PETA-Files.

ok.. lemmy brake sum shit down...

Kid.. i dnt know how many times i've heard E (extacy) lines.. shit is played..
.. shulda bin 2 an 7.. kinda worded it wrong.. i think this isnt that hard of a punch.. kinda a jab..
.. good concept here, props on that.. wasnt really feelin the concept tho.. cuz well we're not in a prison, so its nuttin close to a punch..
.. k, this is a filler line.. simply put.. and on top of that, you added two different sets of multies in ONE line.. it didnt help.. just fucked up yer flow..
.. i think yer 3rd bar had the best structure.. you shuld try that shit out n see where it takes you..

El.. meh.. no real punch, more like a "imma do this.." type of starter.. but a good concept.. & the first line was shaky.. i think alil too much content
.. nice.. good similie.. props on that bro.. i was feelin this bar.. alround nice
.. i see how you tried to incorporate yer concepts from set-up to finisher.. kinda worked but the whole wasted line is played..
.. i think you had a MAD concept here.. shuld finished it like "...PETA-files, but at-best this adult is jus touchin himself//..." i think that woulda bin a fresh play on his name.. but still the concept held sum weight..

flow- tie
punches- El
werdplay- El
nameplay- tie
similies- El
delivery- El
creativity- El
structure- tie
multies- Kid

El... GMV

***would appreciate a vote back ... me v.s. Ren***

1 - 0

Thanks for the pretty deep vote there, & i think you're right with the pedophiles line now looking back it seems that woulda worked nicely.

Anyways, i'll check your battle w/ ren.

opener-both had weak openers for a tourney battle but i give it to el, cause he had complexity, and wordplay and had the set up, but i think u could of worded it better to hit harder
flow- kid
punches-el, his hit harder
werdplay- El
nameplay- kid
metas-el
creativity- El
structure- tie
multies- Kid
closer-el, but i wasnt really feeling both of the closures to be hard hitting, el urs could of been real gd if u worded it better, cause the concept was nice, kid..i can tell ur punch was based on ur multis, like u just kept trying to go multi after multi n make a punch, which let u have flow, cause the multis didnt seem really forced, but it didnt make ur bar into a punch
vote-EL

Ain't no b.s. in my vote here, Famz... [Kid]...

Firstly.... my vote goes to Element`.

Opener - E... better delivery... Kid? this was mediocre at best compared to what I've seen fromyou.
Creativity - E... similies and metas mixed with punches was nice.
Complexity - Kid... rhyme svheme was unique in some ways... stacked multies.
Consistency - E... kept the momentum nicely. Kid, I feel you fell off with your 'filler' type deliveries... the just didn't connect all that good. WErk that shit fir Rnd2!
Flow - Kid... multies were a factor.
Nameplay - Kid... was played... but the only play made that I saw..
Wordplay - E... mixed with some decent metas... nice, Fam.
Punches - E... easy to see. More variety, harder hitting. Wussup, Kid? ou need'uh condition that shit, homie.
Multies - Kid... nice, as alwayz.
Metas - E... some pretty entertaining mets'.
Originality - Kid... scheme and concepts were firing... just not ya' deliveries, mayng. Werk that out.
Delivery - E... on point... lost ampage here and there - but nicely formed lines.
Overall - E... took the cats'.

if you need a more-in-depth b/down... holla'.

lol wat? u expecting me to pop off or something? thats not my style lmao jk...its all good, i mean i kno im rusty and shit, i admit i fell off....just tryna improve ya dig

3-0, el takes the first round
kid i think u can come back for the second round and win

Good battle Kid.

thanks you definetly brought some fire...good job bucko lmao